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Offline absenter

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Old Computer

on: April 12, 2012, 02:35:07 pm



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I'm working on a image of a computer for the controls screen in a game I'm making. My main concern is trying to get the perspective working for the keyboard. Please feel free to rip it apart and show me where things are getting weird. I think I have a reasonably good eye and it doesn't bother me to look at it, but I'd love for a fresh pair of eyes give it a once over.

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Re: Old Computer

Reply #1 on: April 12, 2012, 10:53:57 pm
Hi

I'm not an expert, is just my modest opinion.
I think it looks great, the only thing that doesnt look so great for me is the screen, it looks like there is no screen just an empty hole, maybe some bright would help.

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Re: Old Computer

Reply #2 on: April 18, 2012, 08:50:57 am
I feel like the keyboard has been sawed off or someone took an eraser and erased the right side of it.
Maybe a grey outline like you did the other edges?

Reflection on the screen maybe. Those monitors were bulbous.