AuthorTopic: Haggar (Read 9129 times)

David · **on:** June 02, 2006, 10:30:00 pm

Haggar
The mayor of Metro City. Comments and critiques if you fancy.

Zach · **Reply #1 on:** June 02, 2006, 10:49:59 pm

make the profile bigger

cugs90 · **Reply #2 on:** June 03, 2006, 01:15:44 pm

to me thats a very nice pic its basicly what im trying to do right now..

i cant really critique u on anything as im new to pixeling but i really do like the use of only 4! colours.

really suits the description too

well that or the head of the MAFIA!!

hehe jk

Philip · **Reply #3 on:** June 03, 2006, 05:14:32 pm

Very nice stuff... reminds me of a short-haired Charles Bronson.

Only thing I'm gonna nag you about is that there's no real definable features on his body. What's he wearing? There's no real way to tell as the colors that're there merely define the torso. Some recognizable clothing would be awesome, but it's really up to you.

Evil-Ville · **Reply #4 on:** June 03, 2006, 06:41:04 pm

This is what he's wearing so you can't really define it better.

Tremulant · **Reply #5 on:** June 03, 2006, 08:36:19 pm

Could maybe stand for an extra tone or two for AA, but I assume you want to keep this at four colours.
As is, looks great anyway.

EDIT:
I'd also maybe not use straight black, but maybe a dark reddish purple instead. Just a personal preference, though.

David · **Reply #6 on:** June 03, 2006, 10:18:21 pm

I haven't really done the bottom portion properly yet. He doesn't wear a shirt though, just a belt over his shoulder.

Razz · **Reply #7 on:** June 04, 2006, 05:01:11 am

That's sweet. The top of his hair looks really weirdly flat though. So does his wicked stache.

ps. Final Fight ftw!

Dave · **Reply #8 on:** June 05, 2006, 04:14:16 am

Quote from: Razz on June 04, 2006, 05:01:11 am

Final Fight ftw!

Don't forget Saturday Night Slam Masters. And I always thought Guy and Cody were way cooler (and easier to use) than Haggar, but it's dope nonetheless.

rabidbaboy · **Reply #9 on:** June 05, 2006, 01:05:06 pm

since i can't even do that with a pencil, i'm just gonna say that that's looking very nice.
BTW, Razz, i love that avatar.

David · **Reply #10 on:** June 05, 2006, 06:41:56 pm

I have bad habits when it comes to finishing my art.

Zach · **Reply #11 on:** June 05, 2006, 07:47:41 pm

don't we all, but this looks really polished, so i'm guessing your really focused on this (Y)

David · **Reply #12 on:** June 05, 2006, 10:13:45 pm

No, not really.

Zach · **Reply #13 on:** June 06, 2006, 12:53:50 am

well you should be ass

David · **Reply #14 on:** June 06, 2006, 11:15:34 pm

Dynamo
He smells good.

Zach · **Reply #15 on:** June 06, 2006, 11:17:07 pm

Gil · **Reply #16 on:** June 06, 2006, 11:49:12 pm

I agree with Zach

Tremulant · **Reply #17 on:** June 06, 2006, 11:58:37 pm

Please have my babies. And no arguments about 'being a man' or any of that 'biologically impossible' crap.

Gil · **Reply #18 on:** June 07, 2006, 12:03:04 am

After a second look I do see some "errors", but I'm too lazy to do an edit. I think it's mainly the lower half of the ears, the two "lines" under the nose (don't know the name) and the dark shadow spot under the cheeks that look off. Oh, and decently AA the brows please...

Tremulant · **Reply #19 on:** June 07, 2006, 12:20:11 am

Actually, a very minor thing bugs me, and it's that pure white shine on the tip of the nose. It's mirrored, too, no? But you've done a phenomenal job getting away with it. I stand by my come on.

junkboy · **Reply #20 on:** June 07, 2006, 06:43:18 am

Well, despite the auto-WIN that is commonly attributed to any type of art based on Final Fight, I'd suggest you give him a stronger chin and smaller eyes for a more masculine look.

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