Alright first off, can we say big improvement?
Yeah, yeah I think we can do that.
It's unclear where the light comes from. Top left? Top right? Both?
I'd pick one source and try to stick to it. Too many highlights everywhere makes things look flat.
The styledither on the head doesn't quite fit.
I don't know where this thing comes from nor do I know anything beyond the references but it seems the beak thing is quite smooth so all that structure in there doesn't quite fit.
You're using too many colors that are too close to each other. Spread them values.
Oh also I forgot to correct it but you got the left foot wrong.
There needs to be more foot on the ground, I only drew the clawcircles, not the entire foot.
Keep it up. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!