AuthorTopic: GR#077 - Adventure Game Mockup 3/4 - RPG projection  (Read 12068 times)

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GR#077 - Adventure Game Mockup 3/4 - RPG projection

on: October 22, 2011, 08:01:54 am
I haven't touched this in over a year, but I plan to add/edit it here and there. Feedback/critique wanted.

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Re: AdventureGame Mockup

Reply #1 on: October 22, 2011, 08:38:51 am
updated a bit of the water/pinetree/and dirt.

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Re: AdventureGame Mockup

Reply #2 on: October 22, 2011, 05:28:19 pm
Really love that fox. I think the gray on the girls face looks far too much like stubble, and her eyes don't look completely aligned/ equidistant from the nose. That or.. It's just something with the head shape, I'd just suggest drawing it quickly again and comparing. The sprites are extremely expressive, good work!

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Re: AdventureGame Mockup

Reply #3 on: October 22, 2011, 06:46:41 pm
Totally gorgeous. Nothing negative to say at all, especially since the set isn't even finished yet. Color me jealous! ;)
Edit: Ughhh, your little 16x16 pixel-y grass looks better than the grass I usually paint in full-featured painting programs. You bastarddd. XD

Really, nice work. Reminds me of Tales of Phantasia a bit, which is an amazing looking game.
« Last Edit: October 22, 2011, 06:57:46 pm by jams0988 »

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Re: AdventureGame Mockup

Reply #4 on: October 22, 2011, 07:25:32 pm
thanks guys :)
I'll have to check that game out, looks pretty cool.
here's an update.. worked on fixing the girl's face. better?

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Re: AdventureGame Mockup

Reply #5 on: October 22, 2011, 07:37:56 pm
quick change.. shifted eyes down a pixel (to make her have a less elongated face like the original. and also narrowed the bridge of nose.

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Re: AdventureGame Mockup

Reply #6 on: October 22, 2011, 10:44:08 pm
here's a quick update on the direction im taking with the knight's picture. also worked on the bush a bit.

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Re: AdventureGame Mockup

Reply #7 on: October 22, 2011, 10:44:31 pm
Beautiful! Great lines and really original colors... It looks very painterly.

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Re: AdventureGame Mockup

Reply #8 on: October 23, 2011, 05:00:53 am
thanks :)
here's a small update:

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Re: AdventureGame Mockup

Reply #9 on: October 23, 2011, 06:29:45 am