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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #10 on: October 24, 2011, 08:16:21 pm
Yay.

I think the guys need more hair. Armpithair, chesthair on the standing duder. You know these guys would be hairy.

Dunno about dude in back. Perhaps you could put some huge soundsystem on the back? Massive speakers or something :D
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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #11 on: October 25, 2011, 02:58:31 am
I liked the single figure ones better because the group seemed to crowd the image too much but now that it's (back) to three it feels much better and more concentrated. So it's not boring and not cluttered now, good job. : D

Second the hair notion. Gun doesn't really fit with the machete or the rest of the image (except the car) in terms of style, so you may want to cartoon it up.

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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #12 on: October 26, 2011, 06:29:31 pm

Bam. Dey hairy. Anything else irking people before I polish it up?

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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #13 on: October 26, 2011, 06:56:36 pm
:crazy:

Man pointing the middle finger has the same face as the machete man. huh. Although I've started to become used to it by following it through all these stages and seeing it so many times. Transplant the face of the guy you deleted (in the back seat of the car) onto him maybe?
« Last Edit: October 26, 2011, 08:05:19 pm by pistachio »

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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #14 on: October 26, 2011, 07:06:29 pm
If I may ask a question: why are they naked ? ^^
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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #15 on: October 26, 2011, 07:52:44 pm
Ty pistachio, something i'd forgotten.

If I may ask a question: why are they naked ? ^^

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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #16 on: November 02, 2011, 11:41:36 am


hey ppl. i'm pretty happy with how the animation turned out, but the guys look a little stiff, anyone got suggestions on that?

Seperately I made a shooting animation for the gun guy, and a steering one for the driver, this is just the main loop.

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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #17 on: November 02, 2011, 12:08:21 pm
Why don't you animate the arms and the car aswell so it doesn't look like an animated carousel?

Maybe like this or so


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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #18 on: November 02, 2011, 04:46:05 pm
Keep the smooth motion, but elk's edit shows what would move on the guys. I think the smooth is good, just make everything drag behind the movement a little so it has sway like in the edit. dont forget gun guy's bling! C:

Really nice though. hilarious lol. Wheels don't stay on the ground though? If the car is jumping it does need one bump to kinda jerk it up there and solidify that motion.

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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #19 on: November 05, 2011, 08:55:43 am
i second elk's opinion. needs more bounce and waving dicks and such

i miss your stuff bitty!