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(WIP)Space Ship Unit for game 64x64

on: September 29, 2011, 02:20:11 pm


how it's look?





I want to add animation. ship will shake.
will be what some helpful tips?

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Re: (WIP)Space Ship Unit for game 64x64

Reply #1 on: September 29, 2011, 02:51:32 pm

« Last Edit: September 29, 2011, 03:11:57 pm by Bonan »

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Re: (WIP)Space Ship Unit for game 64x64

Reply #2 on: October 01, 2011, 01:57:11 am


that look better? ;)

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Re: (WIP)Space Ship Unit for game 64x64

Reply #3 on: October 01, 2011, 03:35:49 am
Much more original now, yes.

I suggest higher contrast; stronger shadows/highlights. Try some actual color, too. The grey is rather plain and uninspired. Research Dodonpachi.

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Re: (WIP)Space Ship Unit for game 64x64

Reply #4 on: October 01, 2011, 09:51:03 am

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Re: (WIP)Space Ship Unit for game 64x64

Reply #5 on: October 02, 2011, 01:58:58 am
The problem is that you've now colored it in the same color all over..
You get much better contrast if you're more selective with which parts are gray or which parts are colored.

Also it's looking quite flat, the first design had more depth to it.
I actually think the first one works better if you add panel lines, lights and some color.