AuthorTopic: Into the Forest of Darkness  (Read 2206 times)

Offline Gizmonicgamer

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Into the Forest of Darkness

on: July 19, 2011, 07:38:11 pm


I did this as my silhouette assignment for the TUGS spriting competition over at tSR. For the details of the assignment, please see here:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v493/Gizmonicgamer/theassignment.png

this is my first real "scene" like that, so any kind of C+C would help a lot.

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Re: Into the Forest of Darkness

Reply #1 on: July 19, 2011, 09:41:41 pm
Looking good so far, but the chunks of darkness strewn throughout the middle of the scene are rather disrupting. In particular, the two in the middle just seem like they don't belong there. If you could get rid of those, I think that would improve the piece at least significantly.

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Re: Into the Forest of Darkness

Reply #2 on: July 19, 2011, 11:06:14 pm
I agree with pistachio! I think there's enough interest around the border to show that it's like a broken window into another world or whatever c: