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[WIP] Moon

on: July 14, 2011, 01:01:55 pm
Hello, I'm here again in a time span of my last wip AXE I work on other things, to lack of knowing what to do then I try to do other things.

I Trouser something through C64, C64've been researching and liked it, did just that in a style through clean, without that aspect of zoom.



Well, it's a moon I wanted to do something very simple, just like the clouds and a few tips.

See ya.

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My WIP's that are in progress:

1 - AXE http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=12850.0

2 - MOON http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=12910.0

It just pass it!.
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Re: [WIP] Moon

Reply #1 on: July 14, 2011, 08:35:24 pm
There are no ugly colours, only ugly combinations of colours.

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Re: [WIP] Moon

Reply #2 on: July 14, 2011, 09:42:20 pm
Do not quite understand what you are warning me, I know it is about the AA, is it bad? I would like a critique!.

Thank you.

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Re: [WIP] Moon

Reply #3 on: July 14, 2011, 09:53:26 pm
Do not quite understand what you are warning me, I know it is about the AA, is it bad? I would like a critique!.

Thank you.

Aye, your AA definitely needs some work. Right now you're over-AAing, 'causing it end up looking blurry instead.

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Re: [WIP] Moon

Reply #4 on: July 14, 2011, 10:54:59 pm
It almost seems ironic, I had to soften softened.

Here :

I think it's best, and you? Want more critical and something to complement this sky

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Re: [WIP] Moon

Reply #5 on: July 15, 2011, 01:56:31 am
Have to say Ptoing that's an awsome aa guide. :O *saves*

Also Juniorps, there isn't much to say at the moment. The aa is virtually all there is to critique, get some more stuff onto the canvas so we have something to talk about. Not much point polishing the moon to perfect untill we know what the other compositional elements will be/look like. Also it still doesn't look spherical to me. :\

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Re: [WIP] Moon

Reply #6 on: July 17, 2011, 01:06:08 am
The course, I wanted the complement of that image ever since the beginning was kind of a moon and a big rock / mountain here is a sketch of the rock, I really want to please the critics.





Edit: I think it would be nice a sea with waves crashing on the stone.

« Last Edit: July 17, 2011, 01:16:44 am by Juniorps »

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Re: [WIP] Moon

Reply #7 on: July 17, 2011, 02:04:13 am
It looks like a lemon.
It's to pointy on the sides.

You need to have the exact same AA all around.

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Re: [WIP] Moon

Reply #8 on: July 17, 2011, 02:24:34 am
Which is a very easy fix:


Copy and paste the top portion of the moon that I've highlighted in red. Then rotate it CCW(or 270) and then flip it vertically. Paste it over the bottom portion of that corner the arrow is pointing to. Then, copy that quadrant of the moon(highlighted in red) and paste it over each of the 4 portions of the moon. This will ensure the AA is balanced all the way around.

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Re: [WIP] Moon

Reply #9 on: July 17, 2011, 02:25:50 am
Look at the AA gave a refined, is still like a lemon?  ???



Edition: Dusty, tell me about the last edition, if not good I will do what you said.
« Last Edit: July 17, 2011, 02:28:03 am by Juniorps »