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Offline GOODNIGHTdestroyer

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WIP - Demon Creature

on: May 14, 2006, 10:46:07 pm
I wanted to stray away from the polygons for a moment, and create something really organic.

Yo yo, check it:



Remember, it's a work in progress.
And I am finally seeing that you were the one worth eating.

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Re: WIP - Demon Creature

Reply #1 on: May 15, 2006, 04:59:26 am
The third leg looks a bit short.

Could use a bump on the contrast, specifically on the skin. Right now it looks rather flat.

The negative space between the arm and the leg is causing more visual tension than you probably intended.

My eye wants to see a face, but the ramp is so gradual (might be the light background) that it's hard to distinguish any features (alien or otherwise).

I'm guessing that his left "leg" is an indication that this piece is still a WIP?

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Re: WIP - Demon Creature

Reply #2 on: May 15, 2006, 06:41:10 am
 The WIP looks good. Yes, about the contrast. The contrast needs to be better. The belly shouldn't be below the stomach.

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Re: WIP - Demon Creature

Reply #3 on: May 15, 2006, 11:35:18 am
LOL! Is that a cock?!
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Re: WIP - Demon Creature

Reply #4 on: May 15, 2006, 12:27:57 pm
looks like a cock, probably is a cock. Carrying on?

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Re: WIP - Demon Creature

Reply #5 on: May 15, 2006, 03:56:49 pm
It could be called a third leg, but yes it is a cock. A big juicy cock.
And I am finally seeing that you were the one worth eating.

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Re: WIP - Demon Creature

Reply #6 on: May 15, 2006, 07:49:41 pm
In that case, where's its banjo-string?
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Re: WIP - Demon Creature

Reply #7 on: May 15, 2006, 08:40:22 pm
I'm not making any sense out of the head, and the claw/whatever on his arm looks abit small.

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Re: WIP - Demon Creature

Reply #8 on: May 15, 2006, 10:41:59 pm
Very interesting. Pretty evil design...minus the bright pretty colors heh. The thing could use some contrast, and the 'leg-ish-like-things' could use some volume, they're fairly flat. Pretty cool creature though, hope ya get a chance to finish it.

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Re: WIP - Demon Creature

Reply #9 on: May 16, 2006, 06:28:44 pm


i just really disliked the penis you had....
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