AuthorTopic: GR#067 - Punk Furry Tail High - Chars  (Read 16247 times)

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GR#067 - Punk Furry Tail High - Chars

on: June 22, 2011, 07:59:21 pm
01 08 2011
Playing with light source, cuting composition.
But it didnt help.


29 07 2011


27 07 2011

Very deep water... :/

26 07 2011

Some little progres... :)

18 07 2011

2 days ago i was thought that i should dropt it... little farhrer.

13 07 2011


11 07 2011
« Last Edit: August 01, 2011, 11:18:08 am by Koyot1222 »

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Re: WIP Punk FurryTail High

Reply #1 on: June 23, 2011, 06:39:17 am
1. Furries are bad for your health

2. next time save your pictures as PNG ;) and if you want it to be pixelart, it should be, you should pixel the font yourself
The outlines of that thing are also really blocky and unorganic, might wanna start with that aswell!
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Re: WIP Punk FurryTail High

Reply #2 on: June 23, 2011, 01:24:06 pm
The pose in the first picture is REALLY uncomfy. Try standing like that and you will see what I mean. It's not natural.

Other than that, yes, post your stuff as png or gif please, it will make edits possible so people can show you how to improve on technical aspects.
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Re: WIP Punk FurryTail High

Reply #3 on: June 23, 2011, 07:44:51 pm
Her body is very feline, but her face is quite human (for example, no whiskers or cat nose). Is this intentional or overlooked?

Two types I see usually:

(1) Human with minimal cat costume:



(2) Cat with human proportions plus human hair:



Also, in the second picture, there seems to be liquid coming out of her gun? Is it meant to be smoke?
« Last Edit: June 23, 2011, 07:46:59 pm by piffany »
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Re: WIP Punk FurryTail High

Reply #4 on: June 24, 2011, 05:10:37 am
I was trying to inwent new character for short pixel stories.

« Last Edit: July 28, 2011, 11:26:49 am by Koyot1222 »

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Re: WIP Punk FurryTail High

Reply #5 on: June 24, 2011, 05:45:46 am
I have nothing really to add to your high res problem except that I absolutely in love with your low-res work, especially the poses and the movement within them - amazing.
You style somewhat reminds me of french comic.

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Re: WIP Punk FurryTail High

Reply #6 on: June 24, 2011, 06:49:57 am
Yup, i didn even noticed that someone will recognize it :) Yes, i wanted to stylize my work for old 70-80ties comics :D Or comic openings of french movies from 70ties. First i was thinking abouc creating some short 3 or 4 frame stories but in the middle i was also thinking about making some sort of adventure platform game with that character. Thats why i wanted tu put a littlebit dynamic into those lowres pictures.
I know that ive made some many things that have to be fixed in the future, especialy as someone saw that, like liquid smoke.
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Re: WIP Punk FurryTail High

Reply #7 on: June 24, 2011, 07:09:21 am
Yeah, I'd say with the small ones you nailed that style.
Why do you want to go larger anyway?

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Re: WIP Punk FurryTail High

Reply #8 on: June 24, 2011, 08:47:54 am
Im still learning how to pixel, thats i wanted to make it in hires...
Small update
next one
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Re: WIP Punk FurryTail High

Reply #9 on: July 04, 2011, 12:40:22 pm
I love the little sprites, they're awsome.

My quick edit on the most recent post (specifically the hair). I tried to keep in a similar style (not my normal thing at all was a good exercise), then i got to the bits at the side, which i figured were supposed to be hair aswell?  :-\ And went abit nuts. :P But yeah, what i was trying to show is an approach you could take to the detailing, i saw you started to pillow shade the curly things and it just makes it blury.



I'm interested in seeing this continue. :)