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C+C Ogre

on: June 02, 2011, 10:58:06 pm
Looking for CC.

It is my first try to animate  ;D  Colours from Ragnarok Online


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Re: C+C Ogre

Reply #1 on: June 02, 2011, 11:04:58 pm
I think the movement of the chest and stomach is pretty good, I'd tone down the shoulder shrug though (maybe have them pivot back a little, but less vertical action). the static head looks peculiar with such heavy breathing going on, should probably straighten his neck a bit when the chest pumps out (due to the movement of the spine).

the foot on our left looks like it's on a hill, compared to the other foot, which is flat. could use some darker darks to make it pop, and some more lively, less mauve colors would spice it up a bit too (looks kinda monochrome atm). pixel clusters could use some refining, having a more defined light source might help you make those decisions.

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Re: C+C Ogre

Reply #2 on: June 03, 2011, 12:37:59 am
Thanks alot Cure   :D I wil work on every tip you wrote here

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Re: C+C Ogre

Reply #3 on: June 04, 2011, 07:42:01 pm
having the head move in only the one frame looks a bit off to me
might just be me tho

also he looks kinda depressed, just sayin

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Re: C+C Ogre

Reply #4 on: June 18, 2011, 04:41:14 am
also he looks kinda depressed, just sayin

I thought he looked sad too, so I made him angry instead:



Also, a note on the animation: his collar bones are not moving with the upper body.
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Re: C+C Ogre

Reply #5 on: June 18, 2011, 05:16:01 am
well the eyes have an angry shape, but theyre completely soulless
but at least he isnt gunna cry now lol

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Re: C+C Ogre

Reply #6 on: June 18, 2011, 03:04:34 pm
well the eyes have an angry shape, but theyre completely soulless
but at least he isnt gunna cry now lol

Yeah I think I used too much black on his eyes
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Re: C+C Ogre

Reply #7 on: June 18, 2011, 05:32:09 pm
Maybe I'm asking a stupid question, but why doesn't he have a navel? ???
About the animation: Is he gasping or just breathing? If he's breathing, I think his arms are moving to much.
And I don't like the black eyes. They doesn't look like eyes.
Besides of that, I really like it. Well done! ;D

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Re: C+C Ogre

Reply #8 on: June 19, 2011, 02:00:47 am
also he looks kinda depressed, just sayin

I thought he looked sad too, so I made him angry instead:



Also, a note on the animation: his collar bones are not moving with the upper body.

Oh, i didn't noticed the collar bones thing, thanks!  :crazy:


thanks for the comments