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Offline monsterism

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Need help with my pixel art...

on: June 16, 2011, 11:54:36 pm
So this is my first attempt in pixel art, I read some guides and got stuck in but I'm really stuck in regards to the face I'm creating. Does anyone feel it looks off in the eyes or am I just been stupid?. Really need some help since this is a present for a friend but I'm really getting frustrated by the lack of progress on my end.

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Re: Need help with my pixel art...

Reply #1 on: June 17, 2011, 12:58:27 am
His right eye could be closer to the centre of the face. Maybe round out his jawline a bit (right now there are some obvious angles). Overall the colours could be more vibrant. Finally, what's that stroke of brown above his eyes?
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Disclaimer: I am still fairly new at pixel art, so please don't be offended by my negative critiques :)

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Re: Need help with my pixel art...

Reply #2 on: June 17, 2011, 01:21:37 am
Finally, what's that stroke of brown above his eyes?
i assume thats the starting of the hair