AuthorTopic: GR#053 - Lingerie? Really? - Anatomy, Pose  (Read 6190 times)

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Re: Lingerie? Really?

Reply #10 on: June 10, 2011, 03:25:16 am
The reference might be hard to come by. I used this nifty thingy to find it, so if you wanna try your luck to come across my ref, be my guest. I mirrored her btw, so the ref is facing the right.

Thanks everybody for all of the critique and edits! I've tried to take everything into consideration, and here's the result.

Better, worse?

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Re: Lingerie? Really?

Reply #11 on: June 10, 2011, 03:54:08 am
It still feels like the torso is really stetched to me. I made another attempt at measuring:

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Reply #12 on: June 11, 2011, 01:46:09 pm
Here's my last shot at getting the torso right. I hope it looks better now! I mostly just messed with the inside. Thanks for the help, Eyecraft.


I think I'll be starting on her clothes and refining now unless there's still something glaring.

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Re: Lingerie? Really?

Reply #13 on: June 11, 2011, 11:52:49 pm
Torso is fine, eyes are too large for the perspective. it's a hard angle to get right, but currently the size of them is making her look a little cartoonish.

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Reply #14 on: June 12, 2011, 01:52:40 pm


Clothes, and heh I noticed her eyes were completely too big when I opened them. Do the new ones work any better?

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Re: Lingerie? Really?

Reply #15 on: June 12, 2011, 06:58:17 pm
The legs still seem too short. As for her right hand, is it supposed to look like she's shooting at the sky or just doing the same pose as the left hand? If it's the latter, then her middle finger (on the right hand) should bend slightly.
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Re: Lingerie? Really?

Reply #16 on: June 12, 2011, 07:43:54 pm
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