Well, that is an improvement and it's definitely more readable. However, both torso and head, hair especially, are unnaturally static given she's walking rather briskly, and the arm seems to bend only when it swings to the right... Is this something you plan to fix?
@blumunkee(below): Huuh... That's weird. I didn't notice, but then again that's just me. I suppose I should view it at 2x?