The ULTIMATE combination?

[Tremulant]

I wanted to do something a bit weirder and more restricted palette-wise, and this is the result: a partially cybernetic ex-ninja vampire pirate.

Previous:
http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/Vampirate.PNG
http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/Vampirate3.PNG

Current:


8 colours. C&C?

[Ryumaru]

nice man, i dont really see anything to crit.
of course, its not like im helm or anything 

[Godslayer]

Here, I did an edit:

[Tremulant]

Updated.

Thanks for the comments guys.

Godslayer, your edit brings up some nice points that I've begun to look at (and addressed a bit in the first update). Also points out my stupidity, 'cause I should've seen that that one colour was completely pointless...
Live and learn I guess.

[Godslayer]

His muscles still look a bit too rounded, especialy in the arms and midsection. You should darken the less prominent areas, such as his shins, abs, and upper arm, to give it a sense of form. I enjoyed working on it.

[Tinygiant]

This is a really nice stylised piece, I love the colours! I like the little shines you've got going on on his arms.

[Billeh]

Meh, just messing around here xP, did a lil edit.


Probably not my place *Shrug*

[Tremulant]

Another minor update.

Tinygiant: Heh thanks. I'm glad you like it. Do you mean the metal shines or godslayer's awesome twinkles (cause I love those too)?

Godslayer: I'm trying to work on what you're pointing out. In the new edit, I added some darker shades on the upper arm/shoulder, and darkened the shins. As for the roundness of the muscles, I dunno, just going for a bit of exaggeration. I guess I don't fully understand what you mean about that, but that's cause I'm slow .

Billeh: I think I used most of the stuff I picked up on in your edit in the update, mainly increasing the highlights on the headband. Thanks for the edit!

Thanks for the crits everyone. C&C obviously still welcome

EDIT:
Agh.. forgot to mention why I said I loved GS's twinkles yet didn't use 'em. Soo... it's basically 'cause of the white outline. I like it, so I left it on, and the twinkles can't really coesxist with it. Opinions on which is better are more than welcome, 'cause it's a toss up for me at the moment.

[Dhaos]

Cybernetic ninja pirate vampire? You left a part out, needs to be female XD. Close enough, anyways excellent piece. The outline's a nice touch, but seems a bit jagged around some areas (leg and > tricept). Pants seem a bit over wrinkly too. I love that expression though, its great.

[Darien]

hmm I just want to say I don't really like the design of this.  It just seems like you took one limb or member and decided to give it some type of attribute.  A more well thought out design, where there are pirate and ninja and whatever bit everywhere on the peice and not just on a few select spots (with the torso/chest being something random) would be far more interesting.  but for what this is, it's good, and the pixel work is also good.