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Re: Platformer Sprtie 32x32

Reply #10 on: April 09, 2011, 02:55:35 am
Check the tile please I'm really bad at this.

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Re: Platformer Sprtie 32x32

Reply #11 on: April 09, 2011, 03:41:59 am
Thanks, no he doesn't mine anything sorry, but he is investigating the disapearence of Dr. Freeman. There should be some really strange stuff going on since the theme for the competition in Nine Times were gonna have Nine versions of your dude.

Oh. Hmm. Is he underground, then? If not, I don't think he needs a lightbulb on his helmet, unless it's going to be dark where he is. There should be a decent explanation for everything on and about your character. Also, depending on the setting altering the palette would change, slightly. Mostly for atmospheric effect. Just a thing to consider.

The tile looks nice, by the way, but those marks--I'm thinking they're craters/imperfections in the rock surface--don't really look like craters at all. Somewhat ill-defined, they don't seem to be affected by the light-source much. However I'm probably not going to make an edit. Why?

Good question. Probably a mix of laziness and inexperience, but I'll try.
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Re: Platformer Sprtie 32x32

Reply #12 on: April 09, 2011, 04:04:56 am
Haha ok well I figured his default equipment would involve a light helmet since that could be helpful exploring anywhere, but it should probs be dark. Ok yeah I'm gonna try touch up now.

EDIT: I got rid of the 'craters' and stuff because its just meant to be worn out metal.
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Re: Platformer Sprtie 32x32

Reply #13 on: April 09, 2011, 08:12:23 am
Haha ok well I figured his default equipment would involve a light helmet since that could be helpful exploring anywhere, but it should probs be dark. Ok yeah I'm gonna try touch up now.

EDIT: I got rid of the 'craters' and stuff because its just meant to be worn out metal.

Oh okay. But that's probably not going to do the trick, honestly. The "craters" weren't the only thing that gave me the impression it was made of rock. The material itself seemed rather rocky. Might I suggest strengthening the highlights, maybe adding some bolts at the tile's edges or rust?

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Re: Platformer Sprtie 32x32

Reply #14 on: April 09, 2011, 08:24:24 am
Yeah I'll try but I think I'll be horrible at trying to put in rust.

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Re: Platformer Sprtie 32x32

Reply #15 on: April 10, 2011, 04:05:59 am
If anyone is interested here is our entry http://pyweek.org/e/Adrenaline/. Unfortunately we had to use alot of open source images instead of making them ourselves.