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Offline Ürch

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Little ship thing

on: March 27, 2011, 12:10:12 am
I was bored so i made this thing.

It probably could use better colours, but is there anything else that needs work? It's meant to be a player ship in an arena-style shooter.

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Re: Little ship thing

Reply #1 on: March 27, 2011, 12:26:15 am
I can't tell what some of the parts are. Is that a cockpit window in the middle? The brown parts make me think they're made of wood. It'd be totally cool if they were, though! I'd increase contrast overall.
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Re: Little ship thing

Reply #2 on: March 27, 2011, 02:03:28 am
I think less is more at this scale. too many colors/details/shading/aa is crammed in right now, imo, which confuses the general pixel clusters by breaking them up. high contrast also helps readability on tiny sprites.

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Re: Little ship thing

Reply #3 on: March 27, 2011, 06:56:21 am

update. increased both brightness and contrast, made everything less pointlessly detailed(sort of).

edit:oh, the thing in the middle was originally tacked on as a last-thought type thing without any idea of what it was supposed to be. it is now a cockpit, yeah.

edit junior: boy i am forgetful. yes the brown parts ARE wood.
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