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Draw! (Lines by Zach)

on: April 25, 2006, 05:43:42 pm


With the taste of banana.

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Re: Draw! (Lines by Zach)

Reply #1 on: April 25, 2006, 05:51:27 pm
Love the colours. Really nice textures.
Loving this.

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Re: Draw! (Lines by Zach)

Reply #2 on: April 25, 2006, 07:02:01 pm
Very uhm ... abstract.  The crotch area seems pretty randomly done with no rhyme or reason to any of the folds. The banana looks a little flat too.  The colors are the best aspect but I feel the pants could have been shaded much better.  Also the dithering at and around the torso is confusing.  Looks out of place.

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Re: Draw! (Lines by Zach)

Reply #3 on: April 25, 2006, 07:16:39 pm
Honestly, the only part I really like is the vest, it's excellent. Unfortunately, the lighting is messed up. The pants seem lighted from the front, yet the shoulders make it look like its the lightsource is coming from above and back, and the lower vest gives no hint of the lighting that shines on the pants. The black areas looks like you simply got lazy.

Overall, its promising, but you could improve a great deal.

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Re: Draw! (Lines by Zach)

Reply #4 on: April 25, 2006, 07:49:52 pm
while the folds in the pants seems a lil bit distorted this piece its fucking TOP NOTCH, dude i love this, it has style all over it. sorry if my reply its not really helpfull.. but i really like this as it.. :D

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Re: Draw! (Lines by Zach)

Reply #5 on: April 26, 2006, 11:06:05 am
Thanks for the c+c everyone, I'll try to avoid these errors in my future work. (I just don't feel like messing around with this one right now)

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Re: Draw! (Lines by Zach)

Reply #6 on: April 26, 2006, 05:25:23 pm
I love this. Beautiful colors on the vest. Really weird texture, too, its almost organic looking.

I pretty much agree with all of what God Slayer said. Sonic, also.

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Re: Draw! (Lines by Zach)

Reply #7 on: April 27, 2006, 12:50:21 pm
hehe it makes my day when people color my lines, this is hot shit, but has some problems like what everyone else said..

i hope you go farther with this, the colors make me squeeee like a little girl
EAT PUNAJI  BECAUSE IT'S GOOD AND TASTY