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Offline Basketcase

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Mises Coat of Arms

on: March 14, 2011, 12:29:07 am


11 colours including transparent.

Reference/original: Here.

I think I've just about finished. (I made some small edits in the middle of writing this, from this, to improve the perspective curve tilt) Open to suggestions for modification, though.
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Re: Mises Coat of Arms

Reply #1 on: March 14, 2011, 12:36:09 am
Pixel tech is good, but your lines have major problems. The perspective tilt seems off. The red band appears to broaden as soon as it enters the top left white quadrant.

The book is a little wonky, too. Top edges ought to be flatter like the bottom edges.

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Re: Mises Coat of Arms

Reply #2 on: March 14, 2011, 01:25:22 am
Thanks for the (super quick!) reply, Mathias. I straightened up the book a bit. The curviness of the top was supposed to be the pages arcing. But I think I've improved it now.

The red band being broader to the left and narrower to the right is my attempt at perspective. Those two stars are meant to be the same size really. Haven't touched that in the edit below.

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Re: Mises Coat of Arms

Reply #3 on: March 15, 2011, 09:04:46 pm
It seem's as though there is a dark blue outline on the red Band,  looks awkward.
Anything else has already been said.