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RPG Girl Revisited

on: March 13, 2011, 03:10:06 am

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Re: RPG Girl Revisited

Reply #1 on: March 14, 2011, 12:24:06 am
My eyes are instantly drawn to her shirt instead of her face, maybe try toning down the specularity of the clothing?

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Re: RPG Girl Revisited

Reply #2 on: March 14, 2011, 03:51:20 am
I remember this. Looks a lot better, esp the skirt. Face is really good too.

Now howabout fixing those damn feet so they don't look like wooden legs?

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Re: RPG Girl Revisited

Reply #3 on: March 14, 2011, 05:42:56 am
Thanks for the feedback! I made some contrast adjustments and other various tweaks:



EvilEye, how do you suggest I change the feet? I don't like them much now either, but I'm kind of stumped...

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Re: RPG Girl Revisited

Reply #4 on: March 14, 2011, 08:51:24 am


Style mismatch but that's my best shot. Feet might be a little big too, but I was going by the original size.

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Re: RPG Girl Revisited

Reply #5 on: March 15, 2011, 04:45:39 am
Thanks for the edit, EvilEye.



Meh... I'll keep working on it. :/

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Re: RPG Girl Revisited

Reply #6 on: March 15, 2011, 05:40:14 am
They read more like actual boots now, if you don't have them go all the way up to the skirt, but show some more leg in-between (:crazy:) they'll read even better. The foot shading looks weird somehow, like the curve from the shin to toetip is waay too steep.
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Re: RPG Girl Revisited

Reply #7 on: March 15, 2011, 07:41:14 am
Boots 3.0

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Re: RPG Girl Revisited

Reply #8 on: March 15, 2011, 01:08:53 pm
i have no crits  :) level of pixeling is great, colors are good and pose is fine, only some a small design edit:

i'd make it sexier :P

EDIT: i dig that comment you have below your avatar D:
« Last Edit: March 15, 2011, 01:12:48 pm by Batlorder »