AuthorTopic: [WIP][Nudity] Angel+Wine  (Read 2338 times)

Offline FRAWG

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[WIP][Nudity] Angel+Wine

on: February 23, 2011, 01:13:30 am

This is something I started a while ago and decided to pick back up. I am afraid the proportions are a little messed up, and the arms keep bugging me. As you can tell the wings aren't really even started, and there is no background to it yet. I'd like to see what you guys think and what I can do to make this piece better.

Also, looking over it again, she might be a little wide or not tall enough.

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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Angel+Wine

Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 02:47:50 am
The hair is very nice.

Consider having the halo glow (as a light source).

The proportions of the body are rather inaccurate.  I recommend using some references for the anatomy. 

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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Angel+Wine

Reply #2 on: February 24, 2011, 12:21:26 am
Biggest issue right now is probably her lack of an upper leg. It looks to me like her knees are right below her butt. If you extend that out quite a bit, maybe widen the hips a pixel or two, and curve the lower legs backwards more (look up some reference for that, but the calves and the curve of the shin bone often make the lower leg look like it's bent), I think it would make a huge difference. Might want to extend her buttocks crevice up and back just a little too, it looks kind of flat and small, like a baby's butt. The colors are looking suitably angelic right now though, I'd like to see the finished product!

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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Angel+Wine

Reply #3 on: February 26, 2011, 12:09:53 am
Her lower body is way too small in proportion to her upper body. Also I think you need a couple more intermediary colors if you're going to dither like that.

I did a rough edit:



Reference would help.

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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Angel+Wine

Reply #4 on: February 26, 2011, 01:29:23 am
Get Big Brother in here. Naow.

Evileye, great edit. Your lady has a nice natural feminine curve to her.
OP version is very quirky, Anatomy obviously improvised. And straight as a board, too. The hair is nice, though.
Yes, fetch references. Female form is rarely simple.