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Offline Solluxx

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Bot-Zero

on: January 23, 2011, 06:52:36 pm
hola everyone, heres another pic i would like ur opinion on. Its just a robot i made for fun but i would like to improve it if at all possible.



Ignore the background its just something i threw together instead of white. Ty  ;D
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Re: Bot-Zero

Reply #1 on: January 25, 2011, 02:04:48 am
The black lines in this picture are really turning me off from this piece. How about doing some sel-out and AA, it would look great on this awesome looking robot of yours! ;D
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Re: Bot-Zero

Reply #2 on: January 25, 2011, 02:11:18 am
refine your outlines al little bit more.
bot arms look awkward, since they both have only 1 joint in different places (the wrist on the left, and the arm on the right. )
background and ground could use some shadows.
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Re: Bot-Zero

Reply #3 on: January 25, 2011, 09:51:32 pm
oh yea didnt even notice the joint problem  :P thanks for the tips anything else you guys can see?
and about the AA i use paint so ill see what i can do.
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Re: Bot-Zero

Reply #4 on: January 25, 2011, 11:06:33 pm
heres an update***


i tried really hard to AA the edges but nothing i did looked right so meh.
took away the background cause i didnt like it, added joints,fixed a few little things
So if you can give me a quick easy way to AA id appreaciate it  ;D
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Re: Bot-Zero

Reply #5 on: January 30, 2011, 11:42:36 pm
Hey, sorry if you didn't want an edit, but because of the background.. and well a robot i thought it should look more frightening.
So, i did an edit. Only a quick 2 minute job

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Re: Bot-Zero

Reply #6 on: January 31, 2011, 08:35:40 pm
haha i see what your saying and thanks for the post :D but this was just a little drawing i did for fun, it wasnt suppose to be scary or anything, justa robot. the background was just a placeholder instead of white but even still i like you idea :y:
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