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Offline HC_Bret_Measor

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First Character WIP

on: January 15, 2011, 10:53:28 pm
Hey Everyone,

This is my very first time doing a character. The premise of the character is a cute angel that will fly around and collect stuff. I normally do environmental work and I want to stretch my wings so to speak. All feedback and C&C is welcomed. Thanks for your time.

By Bret Measor at 2011-01-15

By Bret Measor at 2011-01-15

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Re: First Character WIP

Reply #1 on: January 16, 2011, 09:31:31 am
Why are the arms so far down on the body? You have a lot of gradient shading + pillow shading on both versions which makes them look very flat. Think about the underlying shapes and shade things accordingly.