AuthorTopic: kof sprite work in progress*Edit as of 4/17/06*  (Read 7802 times)

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kof sprite work in progress*Edit as of 4/17/06*

on: April 11, 2006, 10:16:50 am
I scrapped my ol one and made this new girl, lyla.

Lyla excels in hand to hand combat combined with telekineses.



c&c please
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Re: kof sprite work in progress

Reply #1 on: April 11, 2006, 07:55:03 pm
A few things are bugging me on this piece--the legs don'g really seem to join with her body too well, it looks like she's got pretty oddly shaped hips.  Also, her left leg is twisted to an angle that looks pretty painful to stand in...

her left hand look's kinda odd too, I think it's because there's too much of the darkest color on it

I like the idea, and the character has a lot of potential.  Keep workin' on it!

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Re: kof sprite work in progress

Reply #2 on: April 11, 2006, 11:21:11 pm
i love the style of her legs.
her left hand seems wierd because the line cutting it off makes it look like she has a glove on.
also her boobs kinda look more like pecs, there not very curvy.

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Reply #3 on: April 12, 2006, 06:12:31 pm
i love the style of her legs.
her left hand seems wierd because the line cutting it off makes it look like she has a glove on.
also her boobs kinda look more like pecs, there not very curvy.

Thanks a lot for the crits! I totally love her pose as well and i won't change it. I do, however, agree with the crit about her chest and hands...those were pretty anonying especially aince this sprite wasn't traced. I just need to find a way to feminize her a bit more.

any other crits?- maybe some on the palette etc. because i think i'm going to fix it and start on her character portrait.

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Re: kof sprite work in progress

Reply #4 on: April 13, 2006, 12:52:59 am
I agree with Reydragk. The stance looks cool, but the hips don't. Also, her > leg is much thinner than her < leg.

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Reply #5 on: April 13, 2006, 12:59:21 am
i kinda thought it was the angle of her legs that made them different widths?

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Re: kof sprite work in progress

Reply #6 on: April 13, 2006, 03:38:48 am
No, it shouldn't be that thin.

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Reply #7 on: April 13, 2006, 09:15:40 pm
No, it shouldn't be that thin.

True, i'll rework it tonight.

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Re: kof sprite work in progress

Reply #8 on: April 14, 2006, 07:41:44 pm
Here Is the Edited Version. C&C?

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Re: kof sprite work in progress

Reply #9 on: April 14, 2006, 11:39:20 pm
It looks nice, but there's still no possible way a person's leg could twist like that unless her joints were broken. Adjust the left leg (our right), so that her foot won't point inwards like that. It just doesn't look natural.

Other than that, it's pretty awesome stuff. Good work.