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Re: Ninja for a game ... ninja

Reply #10 on: November 27, 2010, 05:03:36 pm


Good advice! ;D
and will change the way to a lower pizel and tousled hair
I'm still accepting criticism, because I think the hair is a problem :-\
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Re: Ninja for a game ... ninja

Reply #11 on: November 29, 2010, 12:01:52 am
Let me just say, you've made an improvement in your most recent edit, but it still suffers fro ALOT of problems.
The ninja's anatomy is really wonky and just looks unnatural, your using waaay to many colors, there's lots of banding.
I made an edit to help, and tried to go along with the okami style you were going for, but its still pretty messy so bear with it.  :blind:

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Re: Ninja for a game ... ninja

Reply #12 on: November 29, 2010, 01:52:50 am


Here it is!
fewer colors, you remove the red tape of the mouth, but I get either the face, so I can help with a layout XD
I like your edit, and I wanted to wear it, even I have to finish the game even though I did not, all changes that you do not change anything, I can do it again if something went wrong, so that you can not fix
Well, from what I see, I need to improve the face
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Re: Ninja for a game ... ninja

Reply #13 on: November 29, 2010, 02:24:38 am
Well honestly I would start from scratch.

Get some work on the anatomy of your character first, since he lack any proper form.
http://www.posemaniacs.com/?pagename=randompose
That site has some good references to use. From there, after a fair amount of practice, you should start on your character again.