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Offline nessu

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on: November 22, 2010, 12:57:29 pm
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Re: [C&C would be much appreciated] beginner level.

Reply #1 on: November 22, 2010, 05:31:45 pm

I think it looks better to, change the contrast a bit
Not having description is a description (?)

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Re: [C&C would be much appreciated] beginner level.

Reply #2 on: November 22, 2010, 08:07:00 pm
Hey, got some crits for you! :o Note that I'm not an expert or anything, so maybe my advices aren't that great.

I didn't make any edit for your first image, but just know that you have 62 colors in there. I can see 7-8 of them when not zooming, you might want to fix that. Just try to go with less colors and more contrast, basically, and I'm sure your image will be a lot nicer to look at.

Okay, now for the sprite I made an edit for:


1/ Well, your version. :p
2/ Okay, first thing I edited here was the lines and some shading. I got rid of some colors for now, more colors were not needed yet.
3/ Changing colors, adding shading on beak.
4/ Getting rid of some black lines in the sprite, adding shading at the bottom.
5/ Finally, adding some highlights.

'Hope this helps!