Character Graphix WIP [game]

[Xombiegrinn]

Hello,
I was wondering if I could get some C&C
on this sprite I've been working on.
Its still a wip, and I'm not totally sold on the idea yet,
But its what I've done so far and have to work with.

As you can tell, its pretty simple, and I would like to keep it that way.
But I don't want it too look poorly done either.

NOTE: The hair is a huge wip still.
I dont have a "nude" template yet, but there will be three character sizes in total.

Heres some other random stuff I was working on a few weeks ago.
A game moc up

And all the character animations

Still planning on using these soon.

[EvilEye]

Don't post JPEG's it screws with the pixels. Post in PNG or GIF. It also might help if you posted the character against a more neutral background.

[Xombiegrinn]

Fixed.

[EvilEye]

Lots of stuff here that I can't tell exactly what it is.

Is that red hair or a helmet?

What's he holding? A sword? A gun? A chainsaw?

Why are there stray red pixels behind his back?

I can't tell where his hand is either.

There are two grey spots on his chest that look like a bra.

Where are his feet?


There is no point in putting almost matching colors together especially at such a small resolution, but you do this in many places, especially on the skin. The viewer can't really see the contrast between the two so the result is a flat image.