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Offline Bravlin Pechatnik

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Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

on: October 06, 2010, 11:11:16 am
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Re: Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

Reply #1 on: October 06, 2010, 12:13:00 pm
Welcome to Pixelation!

Before passing to AA, I'd say there are a few issues to fix.
The first is anatomy: I'm no expert so I can't draw a sketch to show you a plausible anatomy, but to me the forearms look way too big; also, the abdomen looks weird because of the muscle shapes and, maybe, of the size (could be a little shorter, perhaps); finally, the neck doesn't present sharp, angled lines (or are they meant to be interpreted differently?).
Then, there's shading: at the moment the piece is heavily affected by pillow shading*. Choosing a different light direction could help you avoid that and make the piece more interesting (and eliminate left/right mirroring in the process.

*You can find plenty of explanations about it and also about AA on these forums.

Keep on pushin'!
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Re: Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

Reply #2 on: October 06, 2010, 01:10:34 pm
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Re: Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

Reply #3 on: October 06, 2010, 08:38:34 pm
Be sure to move the arms and diaphragm when he breathes like that...... It looks empty without that movement.

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Re: Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

Reply #4 on: October 07, 2010, 08:47:34 am
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Re: Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

Reply #5 on: October 08, 2010, 10:31:43 am
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Re: Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

Reply #6 on: October 10, 2010, 03:14:33 am
This is awesome bro.
I think if ur gonna stick with the middle finger one, the finger needs to be a little longer and the arms need to become a little thinner when they are raised, cuz it looks awkward.

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Re: Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

Reply #7 on: October 18, 2010, 07:39:25 am
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Re: Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

Reply #8 on: October 18, 2010, 09:01:35 pm
Exactly. R u doing more than one animation in the full thing?  ???

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Re: Animated Hollow avatar 100x100

Reply #9 on: October 19, 2010, 06:01:57 am
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