robot wires [WIP]

[Demon11777]

Hey Pixelation:)  I have been working on this big guy

Uploaded with ImageShack.us I am having some problems with making the wires on him look like wires xD. I also put up the initial drawing on the off chance that it would be helpful. So any help would be greatly appreciated


Update:

Uploaded with ImageShack.us Still not really happy with the wire effect though 

[Mathias]

Very awkward pose.

This guy doesn't look very well held together. More like a pile of assorted bits; no cohesion. He seems dead, inactive. The wires are the least of your worries. You've made the classic mistake of micro-managing only parts of him with little attention to the whole form.

No feet? What is this thing? He appears to need a lot of refinement.

[Demon11777]

Well that sucks xD. Despite how god awful it looks I actually did put a lot of man hours just into the stance  what can I say? I just a nooby. anywho I have been looking at some stances/ mechs (mostly the one from neon genesis ) And I am kinda happy that you think it looks dead, because he hasn't been active in thousands of years. I never really wanted him to have feet but i will definitely consider it if you believe that it will improve him.  Thank you for your reply 

[Vermolius]

You can always have some wires poking out if you don't want to do feet--as if the feet have been torn away over time.