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Offline Tremulant

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-NUDITY WARNING- Formerly Green Woman WIP

on: April 06, 2006, 01:01:12 am
Hey guys, got a new piece I've been working on for a couple of days, and I thought I'd post it for crits before I go any further. I think, at this point, anatomy is what needs the most work, the legs/lower body particularly, but I'd like to hear some outside opinions.

Older Versions:
http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/WIP/flygirlWIP.png

Current:

New one's pretty much a complete overhaul of the palette. Hopefully some anatomy stuff was righted ,too.
Note that it's meant to give a VERY rough idea of the direction I plan on taking this. I made this edit really quickly, and I'm noticing some sloppiness that wasn't there before (some of the more 'finished' parts got a bit screwed up). I don't know how much I like this new palette either, but it could just be the crappy background that's throwing me.
« Last Edit: April 07, 2006, 04:24:28 pm by Tremulant »

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Re: -NUDITY WARNING- Green Woman WIP

Reply #1 on: April 06, 2006, 01:52:18 am
legs are too close together i think i'm gonna make this an edit
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Re: -NUDITY WARNING- Green Woman WIP

Reply #2 on: April 06, 2006, 02:05:59 am
Love those bold lines. You don't see that in pixel art very often.  :D
The shoulder blade should be level with the shoulders, and the throat should end a little above that.
I assume you'll finish all the AA later?
It's a nice piece. Makes me want to do a color edit. ::)

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Re: -NUDITY WARNING- Green Woman WIP

Reply #3 on: April 06, 2006, 03:18:37 am
Yeah, the old lines are killer. I'm guessing the leg lines aren't finished yet? The upper thighs and hips might be a little messed up ut its looking sweet man.
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Re: -NUDITY WARNING- Green Woman WIP

Reply #4 on: April 06, 2006, 04:05:14 am
The legs are very problematic. I'll edit when I have the time (tomorrow).

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Re: -NUDITY WARNING- Green Woman WIP

Reply #5 on: April 06, 2006, 04:28:50 am
I think the main problem is with the joints, such as elbows, knees, wrists, ankles, hips.. Try studying those areas a bit more.
It's looking good..

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Re: -NUDITY WARNING- Green Woman WIP

Reply #6 on: April 06, 2006, 02:12:10 pm
Her arms are waaaaaaaay to skinny. Kind of scary. =(
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Re: -NUDITY WARNING- Green Woman WIP

Reply #7 on: April 06, 2006, 03:37:19 pm
Seems to me like her hips and thighs are too large and misshapen. Too much fat and loose skin it seems. ^_^ Everything else looks great so far though, apart from maybe her lower left arm is very thin.
« Last Edit: April 06, 2006, 03:39:48 pm by Larwick »

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Re: -NUDITY WARNING- Green Woman WIP

Reply #8 on: April 06, 2006, 04:08:53 pm
Her right (our left, under the arm) breast looks a little odd, it looks concave, it should probably be similar to the other one until the arm is there, and then maybe just 2 or 3 pixels of dark to indicate that it's being pressed inwards.

Edit: Forgot to mention I really like it! Colors are nice and the face really grabs my attention, nice expression. What's she holding?
« Last Edit: April 06, 2006, 04:10:42 pm by Pawige »

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Re: -NUDITY WARNING- Formerly Green Woman WIP

Reply #9 on: April 07, 2006, 04:12:48 pm
Bumped for update. Since it's a pretty big image, I'm just going to be putting the newest one in the first post, and post links to the older versions.

Edit: Forgot to thank everyone for the crits! :P Thanks guys. These are exactly the kindof pointers I'm looking for at this stage.
Oh, and it'll eventually be a sword if i decide to keep it , Pawige. It's all looking a bit clichéd atm though, so I might scrap some parts. :P
« Last Edit: April 07, 2006, 04:18:43 pm by Tremulant »