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Offline Masna

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Treasure Hunter Dash

on: May 13, 2010, 10:23:33 pm
Hey there, Pixelation.  I'm working on graphics for a game my friend is making, and seeing as how these will be used, I could really use some feedback.
Here's the tile set so far:


And a mockup of the opening scene.

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Re: Treasure Hunter Dash

Reply #1 on: May 13, 2010, 11:13:35 pm
I like the tiles, I think they seem to be just right. Very symbolic in nature, and they represent the subject well (we can instantly guess it's a beach).

I'd like to see a little bit more expression in the character's face, but with the limited space, you'll have to be careful.

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Re: Treasure Hunter Dash

Reply #2 on: August 22, 2010, 05:45:24 am
Nego kiujo jokun , negarui Etna-San ter okl.
Nederio giok feriogua node feo tonerna Gian-San XD
Not having description is a description (?)

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Re: Treasure Hunter Dash

Reply #3 on: August 25, 2010, 03:44:01 am
might want to make the footprints in the sand a dark brown, though thats a minor issue I think- the style loks neat so far, I think a little mock-up-scene might give a better idea of the look- in particular i want to see how the outline of the character works compared to the scene elements which don't have an outline.
Also I think the profile of the character needs a little touching up- his nose looks bigger than in the front view, and the perspective of the goggles seems a little funny to me. Maybe get a little curve in his spine too?

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Re: Treasure Hunter Dash

Reply #4 on: August 26, 2010, 11:32:51 am
He looks pretty flat to me.