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[ISO] Walk Cycle

on: August 17, 2010, 03:55:38 pm
Well this is what I have so far, C+C?

Current:



Wire Frame:

« Last Edit: August 17, 2010, 09:49:23 pm by slym »

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Re: [ISO] Walk Cycle

Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 04:30:27 pm
First thing I noticed was that his right leg seems to limp on the pass.

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Re: [ISO] Walk Cycle

Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 04:38:28 pm
Thanks for noticing that. I think I fixed it, as well as making his knee lead the walk more.

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Re: [ISO] Walk Cycle

Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 07:12:33 pm
I tried adding flesh :/

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Re: [ISO] Walk Cycle

Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 07:29:12 pm
His shoulders should move!

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Re: [ISO] Walk Cycle

Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 08:08:09 pm
His shoulders should move!

And his chest, for the matter. There should be some slight side-to-side movement in his chest in shoulders, because without it right now he looks a bit unnatural.

Good luck with this, by the way.
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Re: [ISO] Walk Cycle

Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 08:13:18 pm
Thanks guys. This is what I have now:



I tried adding chest movement, I'm not sure if it's enough though.

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Re: [ISO] Walk Cycle

Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 08:17:34 pm
Hmm. Two things, I think:

1) It seems rather jerky, but part of this might also have to do with my second critique...

2) The chest movement is fine (I think :P ), but the head moves directly proportional to the body, and I don't think that's preferable. You can either stop the head motion entirely or leave it in but reduce the motion by a fair amount. I'd suggest the latter.
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Re: [ISO] Walk Cycle

Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 09:22:01 pm
I say remove the head rotation. People do NOT move their heads left and right when walking, do you?
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Re: [ISO] Walk Cycle

Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 09:26:49 pm
Good point ptoing :P

Ok this is what I have now. Thanks everyone for the awesome critique, it's helping out a ton, as you can tell.