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Offline David

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Er... Someone and I sitting in a tree.

on: April 03, 2006, 03:05:15 am

Lines by Alexander Bruce. Peace and love to and from all please, with a dash of comments and critiques toward the work.
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Re: Er... Someone and I sitting in a tree.

Reply #1 on: April 03, 2006, 03:30:09 am
the fire is awesome :o Not much I can comment on, other than the fire, but yes, 'tis awesome ^_^
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Re: Er... Someone and I sitting in a tree.

Reply #2 on: April 03, 2006, 03:30:55 am
As said before, i love it. Get some more depth and AA into the effect and obviously get onto colouring the creatures.
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Re: Er... Someone and I sitting in a tree.

Reply #3 on: April 03, 2006, 03:07:17 pm
nice colors and movement on the fire... looks a little hurried though... needs more work... AA etc..

I'm curious to see the outcome of the ratfuck! and the toothfairy :S (shame about the row before but heh ho... cest la vie.)
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