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Offline IvanX

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Three characters

on: August 02, 2010, 09:49:21 am
Well two really, just the girl done again in a another style.



There's something wrong with the face of the middle girl, but I cant seem to understand whats wrong with it.

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Re: Three characters

Reply #1 on: August 02, 2010, 02:15:14 pm
I would personally try to saturate the colors a little more on the girls.

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Re: Three characters

Reply #2 on: August 02, 2010, 05:45:03 pm
I think what's wrong with her face, in particular, is her mouth. Rather than the lightest of 2 colors being in the middle, the darkest should be in the middle, and the lightest should be at its edges, and basically the same for the smallest girl.

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Re: Three characters

Reply #3 on: August 02, 2010, 10:36:36 pm
It's mostly well, but I think the proportions on Link are a tad off. I think he needs a bigger heads, shorter/skinner legs, and a smaller shield. For the middle girl....I think her pants should have 2 lines of pixels removed on the left, and maybe her face is just turned too far to her right.

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Re: Three characters

Reply #4 on: August 03, 2010, 01:21:16 am


Tried to take everything said into consideration.
Better?

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Re: Three characters

Reply #5 on: August 03, 2010, 03:20:28 am
I like them. :)

It's a nice style you have there.
Don't see anything that sticks out as wrong anymore.

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Re: Three characters

Reply #6 on: August 18, 2010, 03:10:48 am
These are very nice! Also, the sprite on the far right reminds me of the art style in Eden of The East