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Offline Tarenken

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[WIP] Bird woman

on: July 04, 2010, 09:52:03 am


Just test-texturing the head while waiting for anatomy/lighting crits.

Still, the anatomy is far superior to the original version.

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Re: [WIP] Bird woman

Reply #1 on: July 04, 2010, 10:39:17 am
I'm not an anatomy expert, but...

*The shoulders seem awkwardly places, one is higher while the other is lower.

*From the looks it it, if I were to turn her around, she'd be missing her shoulder blades.

*This could be an artistic thing, but the feathers on her neck blend her shoulders into her neck too much...if that makes sense.

As for the shading, that's not necessarily my best subject, I'll leave that to the better artists here.

*Edit*
Couldn't help myself


Sloppy edit of what I meant.
« Last Edit: July 04, 2010, 11:21:53 am by IvanX »

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Re: [WIP] Bird woman

Reply #2 on: July 04, 2010, 11:40:20 am
Thanks for the edit! I love edits  :D



Hopefully this fixes the shoulder issue. I like the neck so I'm probably going to keep it as is.