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IvanX
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Three characters
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August 02, 2010, 09:49:21 am
Well two really, just the girl done again in a another style.
There's something wrong with the face of the middle girl, but I cant seem to understand whats wrong with it.
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MegaLeon
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Re: Three characters
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August 02, 2010, 02:15:14 pm
I would personally try to saturate the colors a little more on the girls.
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pistachio
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Re: Three characters
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August 02, 2010, 05:45:03 pm
I think what's wrong with her face, in particular, is her mouth. Rather than the lightest of 2 colors being in the middle, the darkest should be in the middle, and the lightest should be at its edges, and basically the same for the smallest girl.
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buddy90
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Re: Three characters
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August 02, 2010, 10:36:36 pm
It's mostly well, but I think the proportions on Link are a tad off. I think he needs a bigger heads, shorter/skinner legs, and a smaller shield. For the middle girl....I think her pants should have 2 lines of pixels removed on the left, and maybe her face is just turned too far to her right.
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IvanX
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Re: Three characters
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August 03, 2010, 01:21:16 am
Tried to take everything said into consideration.
Better?
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VDX
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Re: Three characters
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August 03, 2010, 03:20:28 am
I like them.
It's a nice style you have there.
Don't see anything that sticks out as wrong anymore.
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Greyve
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Re: Three characters
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August 18, 2010, 03:10:48 am
These are very nice! Also, the sprite on the far right reminds me of the art style in
Eden of The East
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