AuthorTopic: [WIP] Pogo-Mech. Critique please.  (Read 9150 times)

Offline Shrike

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here, made the decision for you.
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Offline CrazyMLC

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That's awesome.
Okay, it's a pogo-mech. :3

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Re: [WIP] Pogo-Mech. Critique please.

Reply #12 on: June 09, 2010, 12:30:37 am
heh.  I'm just waiting for an actual animator to rip it apart and tell my why it sucks... that happens here a lot.  it's quite endearing, actually.  :-[
anyways, critique.  that's what we're here for...



I love the colors because the pink was making me think of bubble gum and barbie, thus getting on my nerves.
is my favorite, the contrast works well.
but!
the smaller versions don't seem to accurately represent the larger things, becoming more triangular and making some things smaller in proportion, which they shouldn't be.  like the muffin top thing should be much bigger and take up more room, making the pogo bit smaller.  And why aren't the smaller ones completely highlighted?  :n:
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Point clear?  I didn't do a really good job on the littlest one, it was hard =\
hope I could help
later, mate
happy pixeling. peace

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Re: [WIP] Pogo-Mech. Critique please.

Reply #13 on: June 09, 2010, 02:11:17 am
Awww, no! the animation is great!
Infact, it inspired me to attempt my own animation.


But yeah, I was sort of neglecting the smaller versions... I'm fixing that now. :)

Winning colors!

Cherry Red, Orangey Brown, Dark Purple, and Dark Royal Blue!




Oddly enough...


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Re: [WIP] Pogo-Mech. Critique please.

Reply #14 on: June 11, 2010, 01:09:04 pm
:I I have to say, I loved the idea of a PINK pogo-mech.
Just the irony of a girly colour and something so freakin' awesome made me fall head over heels.
; A ; ah, but now it's got normal 'manly' colours. flair is gone.