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[wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

on: May 20, 2010, 03:02:00 pm
Hi everybody, I'm not very good at this, but I really enjoy doing pixelart. I want to desing a video game character, he's a ninja cat.
Let me know what you think, thanks!





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Re: [wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

Reply #1 on: May 20, 2010, 08:09:49 pm
cool ninja cat! I thought I'd do a quick edit.


I hope it helps! good luck.

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Re: [wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

Reply #2 on: May 20, 2010, 10:56:35 pm
cool ninja cat! I thought I'd do a quick edit.


I hope it helps! good luck.


Great edit! I tihink I got what to do :P I'll post an update soon :)

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Re: [wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

Reply #3 on: May 21, 2010, 10:14:56 pm
ok, I've edited some borders and colors. I think the shadding you did is too complex for me to animate so I leaved it as it was..

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Re: [wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

Reply #4 on: May 23, 2010, 02:27:37 am
Your response to critique does not engender me to want to give you any. If your looking for platitudes of how awsome it is you've come to the wrong place.

Adcrusher did an excelent edit that i think fixes many of your issues. A better approach from that looks too hard i can't do that, would be to try to take on some of his advice whilst keeping it simple so you have ease of animation. We want you to be the best you can be and to do that you need ot try.  :D

This has alot of potential and you should try to realise that. ;D

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Re: [wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

Reply #5 on: May 23, 2010, 07:54:28 am
Looks like he adopted the good part of the edit - the more subtle outline - & disregarded the parts that didn't work - the scribbly cloth & sorta pillowy fur (although the edited arm looked good).
I don't think it reflects his attitude to criticism.

Few suggestions:
Clean up your lines.
Rotate his left ear to face us a bit more.
Bend his left leg or adjust pose - I don't think you'd straighten your leg like that unless you had your centre of gravity above it.
Reshape left foot.

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Re: [wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

Reply #6 on: May 27, 2010, 01:44:25 am
Hi no-named-but-numbered user! thank you for your reply :D

I've done a new edit. I've rotated the left ear and fixed his left leg.

I don't understand what you mean with 'clean up your lines', can you explain me that a little bit more?

Thanks!


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Re: [wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

Reply #7 on: May 28, 2010, 11:27:26 pm
Hi! , I've done a new edit, I think this time I got what "clean up your lines" means XD

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Re: [wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

Reply #8 on: May 28, 2010, 11:30:26 pm
No cleaning up your lines means that you have them smooth but not nonexistant.
I'd do an edit for you if I wasn't so goddamn tired :P
Photocopier: the fact that arne can also code so well
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Re: [wip][C&C] Ninja Cat

Reply #9 on: May 28, 2010, 11:38:39 pm
Oh :( haha well, what do you think, is bad in the way I did the edit? or looks good?


BTW, I dunno if I should start a new thread for the other characters we're designing (I won't upload all of them, just the first ones to learn all I can before continue with the others)., so here's another one, a ninja gal: