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Re: pOrTrAiT of this guy that does stuff

Reply #30 on: May 17, 2010, 12:04:17 pm
sorry for...triple... post but
doh c'mon no cnc?

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Re: pOrTrAiT of this guy that does stuff

Reply #31 on: May 17, 2010, 02:21:24 pm
I got no critic because you didn't fix any of the errors. It still looks to photo-real, looks like a reduce polarize photo. I'm not saying it is, but it looks that way, which is no good.
Yo should simplify/smooth your pixel clusters.
As you see, it's the same critic Mathias and Ryumaru gave you.

I make this edit, maybe it'll help, or not:


You got too many useless skin colour, maybe you could reduce your palette or use some of the colours just for aa.
Before adding things to the portrait, try to finish some part.
The pose is correct, so there's no problem there.
It's very messy though, clean some lines, before a new update.

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Re: pOrTrAiT of this guy that does stuff

Reply #32 on: May 17, 2010, 04:30:31 pm
oh I thought they were referring to the WIP outline and such.
Thanks, I'll get to that soon.

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Re: pOrTrAiT of this guy that does stuff

Reply #33 on: May 17, 2010, 04:56:02 pm
There's a shadow missing under the nose (according to the shadows @ eyes) which without it makes the face look so chubby and volumic...
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Re: pOrTrAiT of this guy that does stuff

Reply #34 on: May 18, 2010, 08:38:00 pm

hope i fixed it
is that what you meant with the nose, elk?