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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #10 on: May 04, 2010, 03:21:38 am
I think his expression is more "determined" than "I don't give a shit."

His legs are a little hard to read and maybe a bit noisy.

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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #11 on: May 04, 2010, 06:56:30 pm
Just my small nitpicks.

1. A foot looks like it's turned backwards in one frame of the run, not sure where.
2. Also, it looks like he's trying to hold his hands together. Maybe make them more apart?
3. I actually thought that one of the legs didn't move. Then I was like, 'oh, it's a gun!'. Maybe have him hold it somehow?

Just some small minor nitpicks. Otherwise, really good. Rock tiles look good by the way. As a quick way to turn those into grass, just overlap your grass tile with it. You could also break up the rocks into smaller bits if that's what your going for on grass.

I like the slower slime animation. The fast one is too jerky in my opinion. I definitly like the hair piece. Really nice!

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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #12 on: May 07, 2010, 11:21:39 am
Thanks guys.



Now I added the hammer guy and fixed the run. However, the hammer guy seems to have lost his personality. Anyone know how to fix that?

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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #13 on: May 07, 2010, 07:09:40 pm
Is he a bad boy?? If so, maybe he expression could change.

Example:

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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #14 on: May 08, 2010, 01:54:14 am
How's this?





Better palette?
« Last Edit: May 08, 2010, 07:00:00 am by Medevenx »

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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #15 on: May 08, 2010, 07:52:47 am
I definitely like this new expression better.
However, I think the new palette is a little too much saturated. The old one was easier on the eye.
Maybe you could try something in the middle of the two palettes?

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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #16 on: May 09, 2010, 05:54:51 am


First tileset done.

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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #17 on: May 09, 2010, 06:08:39 am
D;! don't flip your tiles sets! and the enemies could also use a revamp as the sprites ;D. apart from that I love how the main guy looks like his expression mostly.

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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #18 on: May 09, 2010, 09:38:04 am
How would you wish me to do those down tiles then? :) I'm just missing the slime and robot.

Added a possible boss.
« Last Edit: May 09, 2010, 09:53:32 am by Medevenx »

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Re: [WIP] Mockup and Characters! - Heavy Remaking

Reply #19 on: May 09, 2010, 12:09:25 pm
I like the simplicity of the colors. I think you should give one of them at least a smirk though. To add more interesting variety in characters instead of all of them being all serious.