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Offline Shadow Serpent

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[WIP] Base Sprite

on: March 21, 2010, 12:12:29 am
I've been working on this base for a bit, and I could use some criticism on it. I know the side states need a lot of work, but here it is:



Thanks in advance.
« Last Edit: March 21, 2010, 05:26:36 am by Shadow Serpent »
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Offline zez

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Re: [WIP] Base Sprite

Reply #1 on: March 28, 2010, 09:03:06 pm
right now its looking a little blocky, try tapering in the torso (make it smaller towards the hips) on the front view, and making the legs slighty rounder. On the side view, make the peck stick out slightly (not to much, or youl give him tits)
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Re: [WIP] Base Sprite

Reply #2 on: March 30, 2010, 09:41:03 am
I think the legs are too narrow. They are as narrow as his arms which
makes his upper body seem huge.

Also the arms could be tad longer.
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