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Offline ChadHachey

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iPod Touch

on: March 13, 2010, 03:56:05 am

I've been playing around with pixel art on and off for about a year now, and I made this picture a couple weeks ago. I believe it could use some improvement.
You can shower me in brutal critiques as a welcome to the forum =)

I used this reference for the album art
« Last Edit: March 14, 2010, 05:35:39 am by ChadHachey »

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Re: iPod Touch

Reply #1 on: March 13, 2010, 03:59:28 pm
For an iPod Touch it seems a little wide, it looks a bit more like an iPad to me.
You could try some shine/highlights on the screen, to give it some depth and make it more interesting.

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Re: iPod Touch

Reply #2 on: March 14, 2010, 04:43:40 am
Plus angle it so you can get some lighting/interesting stuff going on

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Re: iPod Touch

Reply #3 on: March 14, 2010, 05:06:53 am
To McClaneGames:
Hm, guess I'm not the only one who thought the proportion was off. I'll make an edit to that and attempt at adding some highlights, but I've never been great at that stuff...
To Trub:
I kinda wanna keep it at the same angle, maybe once I'm done my portrait I'll try out an angled version. Thanks for the suggestion though =)


This look any better? Or is it too thin?
Anyone wanna give me some pointers on adding some highlights, I'm not sure how to go about doing this.
« Last Edit: March 14, 2010, 05:23:16 am by ChadHachey »

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Re: iPod Touch

Reply #4 on: March 19, 2010, 08:38:15 am
I think the thin version is okay now, I have a real one in front of me right now  ::)
And The thinner one is the best match...