pOrTrAiT of this guy that does stuff

[MadHatter]

[alkaline]

The arms and legs look a bit broken, partly jagged black edges and partly uneven outline. Specifically his right arm, and left leg.

Adding a crotch might help.

As for the feet, the way his right leg is rotated means his foot should be set slightly left of the viewer. Basically, his right leg is in an awkward position. His other foot would probably point downward a little as well, and not be completely straight on the ground since he's not completely at eye level (shirt curves down). Legs could afford to be lengthened a little.

[MadHatter]

Thanks a lot for the help, I'll update soon.

edit;
do you mind showing me what you mean?

[MadHatter]

update;

added a foot....
i kinda didn't do much more, cuz i suck at AA and didn't understand the rest.

r.r

also

i added a new character
i call him fred, because the name sounds like narwhal, which is my favorite animal.

i also suck at anatomy

so edits would be helpful

[1up]

my first thought when entering this thread was

did i make sprites without realizing it
and them make a new account to post them on

because i wouldn't be surprised if i did

my generic standing perfectly still thing is there too
hmm

[MadHatter]

are you accusing me of stealing?

i like your work, and followed your style from these;


but I didn't steal anything.

[1up]

haha no if i was accusing you of stealing i'd be a lot more direct about it


it's just
i literally thought i made those sprites and forgot about making them
but then i thought your name and went "oh ok"

[MadHatter]

oh, ok.

do you think i got the style right?

[1up]

well

it's kind of small and there's some things i'd do differently but yeah pretty much

[MadHatter]

small was on purpose

cuz i might animate

and i really dont want to animate something of that size.

do you mind telling me what you would do differently?