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Offline Masna

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Gamer WIP

on: February 28, 2010, 10:32:50 pm
Sorry for making another thread for a new piece.

I'm not nearly done with it yet, but I would appreciate any feedback anyone has to offer.  ;D
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Re: Gamer WIP

Reply #1 on: February 28, 2010, 10:35:21 pm
I want his shirt
Also I can't tell if he's wearing a blue shirt with a black jacket or a blue shirt with black sleeves, I would do something to make whichever it is more obvious.
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Re: Gamer WIP

Reply #2 on: March 02, 2010, 08:22:49 am
Well, if it's a new piece it deserves its own thread, ehehe. Is he holding a handheld game machine? Maybe putting some details from an actual system would help reinforce that idea. (i.e. a cartridge slot like the gameboy)

Is he not looking at the game on purpose? It's almost like he's looking forward in a daze.
Either way, it's got a really good mood to it.  :)
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