yeah, I was a bit out of it when I wrote that and came off a lot harsher than intended. Whoopsididdles, haha

The face looks a lot better now, and you've done a lot to clear up the forms.

A big problem with the sprite that I was kinda saying "could be glossed over" about is that the style you're rolling leaves it hard to critique the anatomy of the piece.

notably her hand/wrist is bone-thin and then some, with a bit of disjointing at the wrist especially. The forearm as visible also has somewhat of an ill-defined shape, and it feels like there's something also up with the length of that forearm compared to the shoulder-elbow length.

Same for the feet and legs below the knee. However, it DOES give the design a nice spindly appearance that lends well to the sort of "Deadly Noble Elf Warlock" vibe the character has going on.

Notably however, she doesn't read as female due to the shoulders being so much broader than the hips. Generally the inverse is the case, at least to "traditional" beauty standards. This is not a bad thing necessarily though, I actually push for details like that designing women since you don't see a lot of androgynous/nonstandard designs on chicks, but it's something to keep in mind about your intent with the design.

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