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Pixel Art / Re: Mossy stone head
« on: July 07, 2010, 01:24:21 am »
I would say that you should use a little more about shading and depth.... The problems I see here are mainly because you have the shape fairly decent, but i think there could be a little bit more with the lights and shadows.

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Pixel Art / Re: A Dodo(thing) WIP
« on: July 07, 2010, 01:08:44 am »
The red and pixels at the front of the wing and on its feathers seems to stand out against each other a bit too much..... It looks like you're trying to do a 3-d glasses effect. That and the grey to lighten the wings seems as if it were equal in brightness than the brown is.

So, really, all i have issues with so far is the colors.

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Pixel Art / Re: 2D RPG Sprites
« on: July 07, 2010, 01:06:08 am »
When the back foot is behind him in the side view it looks a little odd.. it's a bit less slim than it was in front of him.

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Pixel Art / Re: Some Help with my intro (Wip)
« on: July 07, 2010, 01:00:10 am »
I agree with Mathias. If you're not a pixelartist, it's not a good idea to start with such a big canvas. When i used to make title screens for my games i'd use something more like GIMP, Photoshop, or (don't laugh) even PowerPoint.

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Pixel Art / Re: Hardest work so far...
« on: July 07, 2010, 12:49:47 am »
Well, i am good with portraits, not too much in pixelart though, and i do like the work you've done with that face.

One thing that seems to bug me (i realize it is unfinished) is the hair. I think the colors need to be adjusted a little more and a bit more shine would be nice. It should also look like there is multiple strands of hair rather than large clumps. I realize you've done this in a lot of areas but in some it is lacking. The main problem is the definition of the hair color.

If you are going for a realistic pixelart, i suggest you remove or replace some of the black outlines on the chin and eyes (unless being used lashes or make up or something)

And one final thing, the ear looks a bit odd. It looks way too separated from the head and it looks liek it could be lowered a tad. Most ears are right in-between the eyes and the bottom of the nose.

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Pixel Art / Robo-eye Pixelart
« on: July 06, 2010, 01:51:13 pm »



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I tried using more hues and saturation, and that was my only goal.

Any comments/ critiques?

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General Discussion / Re: Read the Rules, then introduce yourself here.
« on: July 04, 2010, 05:38:51 pm »
Well hello to you all!
I'm FRAWG, a young pixel artist who hopes to get into a career in computer graphics.

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Pixel Art / Re: My first "serious" pixel art project.
« on: July 04, 2010, 05:34:15 pm »
I was only planning on doing the head.

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Pixel Art / My first "serious" pixel art project.
« on: July 04, 2010, 02:00:08 am »
Well, i am new to the forums, but i have been making small pixel art for games. Today i tried my hand at a more serious work, using a 256 color palette. It is a frog. I am currently using it as my profile image, but i will post it here anyways:

any comments or critiques?

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