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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Rock Head
« on: June 14, 2010, 01:02:11 am »
Here's a side by side for convenience :)
Mine - > yours - > Corinthian Baby's


Something that really comes out as a positive note on Corinthian Baby's is the shadows and highlights. He did a better job than me :)

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Pixel Art / Re: Red Tail Hawk
« on: June 14, 2010, 12:58:52 am »
I actually like the photo realism in it. I know what you guys mean by pixel art not meaning to look realistic, but I prefer realism :)


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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Rock Head
« on: June 13, 2010, 09:28:23 pm »
The 2 top most colors are too similar. If they are too similar and barely distinguishable, then there is really no point in having both. Also, don't be afraid of shadows :)

Your lines are very jagged and dirty.

You may also want to look into selective outlining.

Here is my edit:


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Pixel Art / Re: Red Tail Hawk
« on: June 13, 2010, 03:21:57 am »
< reference

Its not exact.

About my personal text, its just black block

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Pixel Art / Red Tail Hawk
« on: June 13, 2010, 12:28:45 am »


It's final in my opinion. Comments welcome :)

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Robots TD Game
« on: June 12, 2010, 01:14:14 am »
There are two meanings to top-down AFAIK, GTA 2 style, and Zelda/RPG styles. I think you're going for GTA 2 style.

I agree, its really confusing. You may want to add more shadowing to the one on the left. At first, I thought the one on the right was a side view because of the bottom (thrusters?). There is not enough shadowing on this (the right one) as well.

You should think about the type of genre this tower defense game will fall under. So far it seems like the futuristic genre. Try adding things that glow, and very intricate circuitry.

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Pixel Art / Re: Facial Anatomy
« on: June 09, 2010, 05:44:55 pm »
The shading is obviously not complete, and needs a lot of reworking in areas.  However I thought I would post this as I'm too tired to continue working for tonight having just finished an exam.  Some opinions on whether this neck anatomy is looking alright would be appreciated.


The throat is way too defined. You normally don't see every section of someone's throat. In men you would see the middle (Adam's apple)

Here is my edit:


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Pixel Art / Re: Facial Anatomy
« on: June 08, 2010, 02:55:58 am »
Xiphirx I'm not exactly sure how thats supposed to uhh, help him out. If you were inspired by it or something maybe it'd be in your best interest to make a new topic on it so people can critique it on there.

Oh, it shows what I mean regarding the eyes.

I also tried to show that you don't need that much dithering, I think the dithering ruins the skin texture...

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Pixel Art / Re: Facial Anatomy
« on: June 08, 2010, 02:50:04 am »
Here's my take on it

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Pixel Art / Re: Facial Anatomy
« on: June 07, 2010, 04:33:24 pm »
The eyes look odd, its probably because they appear circular...

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