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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: knockin' some rust off
« on: July 24, 2011, 07:36:39 pm »
Hey just a n00b's opinion here but...
At a glance (which is all that should be required), I'm having difficult seeing exactly what's going on in the torso. At a closer look, its great, but when pulling my head away from your pixels I feel that your shadowing on his right breast is the problem; it makes the chest appear generally poorly defined and thus not immediately visible as a chest. I would strengthen that side a bit and not worry too much about the implied shadow being cast on it by the hood and/or the sternum of the breastplate.
At a glance (which is all that should be required), I'm having difficult seeing exactly what's going on in the torso. At a closer look, its great, but when pulling my head away from your pixels I feel that your shadowing on his right breast is the problem; it makes the chest appear generally poorly defined and thus not immediately visible as a chest. I would strengthen that side a bit and not worry too much about the implied shadow being cast on it by the hood and/or the sternum of the breastplate.