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Pixel Art / Re: Having problems with some faces
« on: December 06, 2009, 07:29:59 am »
Hello. I like your construction process and the light colors and shadows. I think you can retouch two things:
Here's my EDIT:

I adjust the eyes so his look points in right direction. In 3/4 view, the eye that is far from us must have a little deformation stretching his shape, i reduced in 1 pixel the pupil.
Even the blonde persons have underlined eyes, i emphasized his contour a little.
The lips can finish in a more pointed form, i add one pixel.
Emphasize the nasal hole a little.
The shadow at side of the mouth i think is too much marked (just a little) i down his tone.
For the crane you need to think that the hair has his own volume and alwais will be out of the skull line. Draw your crane line as guide, but think that hair has his space and dont share the line of the crane for him. Except is the character is cropped or bald.
Well i hope this helps you.
Here's my EDIT:

I adjust the eyes so his look points in right direction. In 3/4 view, the eye that is far from us must have a little deformation stretching his shape, i reduced in 1 pixel the pupil.
Even the blonde persons have underlined eyes, i emphasized his contour a little.
The lips can finish in a more pointed form, i add one pixel.
Emphasize the nasal hole a little.
The shadow at side of the mouth i think is too much marked (just a little) i down his tone.
For the crane you need to think that the hair has his own volume and alwais will be out of the skull line. Draw your crane line as guide, but think that hair has his space and dont share the line of the crane for him. Except is the character is cropped or bald.

Well i hope this helps you.