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Pixel Art / Re: Platform game character critique.
« on: November 29, 2010, 09:51:00 pm »
Mmhhh

I don't like the fact that he doesn't 'bend' is his knees, but just moves down a pixel very roughly, same concept with the arm.

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Pixel Art / Re: Ninja for a game ... ninja
« on: November 29, 2010, 02:24:38 am »
Well honestly I would start from scratch.

Get some work on the anatomy of your character first, since he lack any proper form.
http://www.posemaniacs.com/?pagename=randompose
That site has some good references to use. From there, after a fair amount of practice, you should start on your character again.

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Pixel Art / Re: Ninja for a game ... ninja
« on: November 29, 2010, 12:01:52 am »
Let me just say, you've made an improvement in your most recent edit, but it still suffers fro ALOT of problems.
The ninja's anatomy is really wonky and just looks unnatural, your using waaay to many colors, there's lots of banding.
I made an edit to help, and tried to go along with the okami style you were going for, but its still pretty messy so bear with it.  :blind:


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Pixel Art / Re: Anaïs
« on: October 27, 2010, 01:26:13 am »
Hmmmm...she is pretty damn skinny isn't she...might need to give her some more meat, possible shorten the torso too.

As for the not-so-practical design, that just for fun on my part.  ;)

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Pixel Art / Re: Anaïs
« on: October 27, 2010, 12:47:06 am »
Ive tried to consider the advice given to me, and I'm pretty happy with the hair and face, but dat armor... :yell:
Also considering making the character's smaller sprite smaller for easy animating purposes.



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Pixel Art / Re: Anaïs
« on: October 23, 2010, 09:52:33 am »

Well I fixed up the low knees and played with the face a bit, burr.

More importantly though, I started a larger scale piece that I'm experimenting with.
Honestly, The face is th only part I can stand looking at.

So My own status report of errors says.
    *chest piece has colors that don't blend very well.
    *Hair is pretty flat and bland.
    *That arm....it's in need of a total revamp.

Well While I work on it myself, I can only hope I get some nice criticism.  :)

@ O/N
My Keyboard is magic and can type magic letters.

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Pixel Art / Anaïs
« on: October 21, 2010, 03:28:04 am »
Not much to say
I haven't done anything pixel related in the longest time and want some critique on a character I started recently.



Rip it apart now  ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: Quick anatomy work (nudity)
« on: September 16, 2010, 03:55:28 am »


Made a quick pair of legs and fixed up the breast and head.

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Pixel Art / Quick anatomy work (nudity)
« on: September 15, 2010, 08:33:15 am »
It's been quite some time since I've had time to pixel something due to my excessive school work, right now, at 1:32 a.m. I decided to work on my gawd awful anatomy.
The arm looks strange, I couldn't get decent looking legs and the breast seem...forced into place.
Now brutally critique me to make me work on this.



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Pixel Art / Re: Nes Portraits + beginning of mock up
« on: August 09, 2010, 08:29:42 am »
haha,
I was just working on a hair bounce, aaaand...



...there it is. Honestly, I think its too much bounce for such a calm looking run, So I might need to fix that. >_>

* Quick edit*



I figured out the magic of moving the head a single pixel to the left and speeding the animation up a bit.

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